I saw a perfect tree today
From my cabin bed on a Via Rail train
Through the North of Ontario
I saw a perfect tree today
It was tall and thin and scraggly and prim
Then I saw another just as perfect
Short and sturdy with branches and brambles
And then another with a rugged fat trunk
Older than the rest, but just as perfect
I saw a dozen trees in a clump sharing the light
So their growth was stunted
But regal they were, plumped and perfect
And then a small twisted tree
with leaves fallen, trunk slanted
all the more perfect
I saw tens and hundreds, and thousands
And hundreds of thousands of trees
Not one single tree exactly like another
And yet they were all perfect, all perfect trees
A man-child from Mississauga heading to bend steel
To make his fortunes in the Alberta oil fields;
“I’ve never seen so many trees in my whole life”
A balding dude 30 years a social worker
Retiring home to Winnipeg, calms;
“Where I come from they cut them all down,
long, long, long before I was born.”
And I am reminded—This land, this land
Where cities have sprouted,
Blooming glistening skyscrapers at night
T’was all covered with trees once
One big forest we were once
All perfect trees.
Lillian Allen praises the rampant diversity of trees in Northern Ontario and asks us to see perfection in difference.
2. The word “perfect” is repeated nine times in this poem. What effect does this repetition have? In your opinion, what is the significance of having the word appear this many times?
3. The descriptive words used for trees vary greatly – “thin,” “scraggly,” “prim,” “rugged,” “fat,” “regal,” “plumped,” “twisted,” etc. What does this variation suggest to you? Were any of the words surprising to you, when describing a tree?
3. Do you think she is describing something more than or other than trees?
4. In the final lines, the poet writes: “One big forest we were once / All perfect trees.” Why does she use the word “we” here?
5. If you were reciting this poem, where would you speed up? Where would you slow down? Do you read the rhythm of the poem as being akin to the rhythm of a train?
Writing exercise
Write a poem that plays with repetition in the way the title is repeated in “I saw a perfect tree today,” as well as the word “perfect.” Try to make the word new somehow with each occurrence.
Useful links
https://thevoiceoftrees.weebly.com/our-blog/voice-of-trees-in-toronto-canada
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xls5ipbU4UA&t=3s
https://ontarionature.org/immediate-action-for-old-growth-forests-blog/
Copyright © Lillian Allen. Originally published in Heartwood: Poems for the Love of Trees (League of Canadian Poets, 2018).